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Thursday, November 26, 2009

my nite is your nite (poem)

    • the city with you
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the city with you

the city with you

lights and love

                                   you breathe...
                                 your eyes open...
                                 you smell life as it glides...
                                    

                                  the moon glares in your eyes as you eyes glares back
                                  im so cold when im by myself but when im with you
                                  you set me on fire......

                                   when you life is threatened my love is ready to protect you
                                   the shadows of the city scatter when we hold hands 
                                   our love is like a candle the more it burns
                                   is the more i love you...

                                   as we head to my place we head to the roof and i ask you how
                                   many stars do you see you say none but i say i see two  and you say 
                                   where? i say there right in front of me and there right in you..its your 
                                   eyes that makes the nite and as i kiss you lips the city blacks out and 
                                   the stars shine with the moon but yours is the only ones i wanna see
                                   babe....

                                                                     <END> 
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  • Aj's Avatar
    Posted by Aj Fri May 29, 2009 10:03am PDT

    o pretty pic!

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  • RyneishaB_05's Avatar
    Posted by RyneishaB_05 Fri May 29, 2009 10:04am PDT

    Tommy this is a really good poem...i like it...i love the pic too...its so nice:) city lights!!!!! Reminds me of someone:)

    I hope you have a wonderful day!!!

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  • __A_YAHOO_USER__'s Avatar
    Posted by __A_YAHOO_USER__ Fri May 29, 2009 10:26am PDT

    That's a really nice poem! I like the picture too. I've always loved pictures of the city at night. Wow!!!! Have a wonderful weekend!!! (((hugs)))!!!

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  • Linda's Avatar
    Posted by Linda Mon Jun 1, 2009 4:58am PDT

    Nice pic it made my day!!!!

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  • clearwatertree11's Avatar
    Posted by clearwatertree11 Mon Jun 1, 2009 9:22am PDT

    HELLO TOMMY...................................BEAUTIFUL NIGHT THERE.

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  • jessy's Avatar
    Posted by jessy Mon Jun 1, 2009 9:48am PDT

    hey! how are you doing?

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  • clearwatertree11's Avatar
    Posted by clearwatertree11 Mon Jun 1, 2009 9:53am PDT

    LOL!!! CUTE, I HAVE HAD THOSE DAYS WITH THE CAT FIGHTS AS WELL ONCE BUT NOW WE ONLY HAVE ONE CAT AND ONE DOG, MY DOG WANTS TO PLAY WITH THE KITTY BUT KITTY DON'T WANT TO. I'M DOING GOOD AND BABY IS TOO, I ONLY HAVE THREE MORE MONTHS TO GO I'M 26 WEEKS NOW. THER DAYS ARE GETTING CLODER AND CLOSER TO THE DUE DATE, I HOPE MY SON DON'T TAKE TOO LONG TO COME OUT I HOPE IT TAKES AT LEAST 15 TO 3O MINUTES. LOL

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  • casy's Avatar
    Posted by casy Mon Jun 1, 2009 9:54am PDT

    Very Good.Love the pix too......Stop in some time I have a couple of Poems........Well I have to run......Catch ya later babe...........Much love.......Casy

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  • Jules (jellybean)'s Avatar
    Posted by Jules (jellybean) Mon Jun 1, 2009 9:55am PDT

    Hey Tommy,

    great poem I loved it! Nice pics too.

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  • JOY's Avatar
    Posted by JOY Wed Jun 3, 2009 7:57am PDT

    I just want to gaze at the stars in my lover's arm.. Your poem put me in a romantic mood..& the pic's... Very Nice.. Thank-you for sharing it !

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