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Wednesday, November 25, 2009

You Asked Me What Would Make Me Happy (poem)

You asked me what would make me happy

I didn’t know what to say

I thought about the question often

I think about it everyday

This situation we find ourselves in

This relationship that doesn’t win

The love we feel I never doubted

In times of struggles, when we cried or shouted

I don’t know what to do anymore

I don’t know what to say

It’s no longer about anger, it’s not about who’s to blame

No matter what we do, the result remains the same

We fight and yell, say nasty things

We cry and hug and pray it brings

Some sort of solace a remnant of peace

A chance together, a permanent release

From all the issues that lie between

Time and again our victory unseen

Our love and fear is our anchor and chain

We don’t want to give up, don’t want to start again

Our stubborn hearts convinced us it was right

Never mattered how much we lost in the fight

The years add up, they just fly by

The tears come and go, they flow and dry

You asked me what would make me happy

What would it take to make me smile?

I still can’t give you an answer even though it’s been awhile

You are in my heart forever, that’s a truth you can believe

We just can’t make our love work; it’s something we can’t achieve

But I think to find what makes me happy

We have to let this go

The answers to your questions I’m finally ready to know

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  • Aaron Michael's Avatar
    Posted by Aaron Michael Thu Nov 5, 2009 6:18pm PST

    Very nicely said.

    However, I hope that it's just something that caught your eye and not a situation that you are in at the moment.

    This reminds me of my personal situation sometime back when I was involved with someone and it was an intense and so so wrong...

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  • Laura's Avatar
    Posted by Laura Thu Nov 5, 2009 6:38pm PST

    Unfortunately it is my real situation. The better part of sixteen years is not an easy thing to give up on. It is hard to admit when you are truly done trying.

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  • CarrieT's Avatar
    Posted by CarrieT Fri Nov 6, 2009 7:50am PST

    where can u find love not a real thing, people said it's frist thing the look at someone the right way. there is a soulone out there who wanted the samething if u wanted.

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  • Guadalupe's Avatar
    Posted by Guadalupe Fri Nov 6, 2009 9:16am PST

    THe years add up, they just fly by

    The tears come and go, they flow and dry

    Man thats the story of my life.....i love this poem.

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  • Amy's Avatar
    Posted by Amy Fri Nov 6, 2009 3:50pm PST

    That pretty much sums it up. Its ironic that I came across your poem since I am going through a bad split after 11 years. Thank you for posting.

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  • SurferRob's Avatar
    Posted by SurferRob Fri Nov 6, 2009 4:01pm PST

    Must be in the air....I had to tell someone just these words today...

    It'll get better...might not seem like it now...but it well. Hang in there ya'll.

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  • mrs jaye 4life's Avatar
    Posted by mrs jaye 4life Fri Nov 6, 2009 4:10pm PST

    I feel you on this. I love what you said and it hits home too well. I have not been happy for a few years now and just don't know how to continue. You have really nailed this one for me. He asks me if I am happy or what would make me happy...I can not give him an answer.

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  • t's Avatar
    Posted by t Fri Nov 6, 2009 5:13pm PST

    what a day to find this poem...it hits the nail right on the head. my and hubby have been together for 6 years and have a kid, but i just found out he has been cheating on me for over a month. i love him but i don't know if i can stay in this relationship that has made me so unbearably unhappy. what to do, what to do..

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  • Alicia's Avatar
    Posted by Alicia Fri Nov 6, 2009 6:32pm PST

    this is soooo true...i love it and it brings a smile to my face knowing that after 11 yrs it is finally time to let it go. everything happens for a reason. im 2 wks into my break up and sometimes i wonder what my future holds and reading this just helps me thru my "hard time," good luck to all of you out there goin' thru "it"!!

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  • raquel's Avatar
    Posted by raquel Fri Nov 6, 2009 10:53pm PST

    Whoever you are thanks for the poem, i was with my boyfriend for eleven

    years putting up with his cheating and liying habits thinking he loved me and that at some point he would changed for me, he never did and now he just can't believe my love for him is gone. What would it take to make me smile? he always asked knowing that his actions were the reason

    for me to be sad and stop smiling..

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